Persuading Peter Pan, by Madison and Alfie

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2 Responses to “Persuading Peter Pan, by Madison and Alfie”

  1. William Says:

    Some really great work. You could of use some conjunctions and semi colons.

  2. Mrs Atherton Says:

    I really enjoyed reading your letter Madison and Alfie, I especially liked the reasons you gave in your last paragraph. I’m sure you will have given Peter lots of things to think about.

    Mrs Atherton


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