Show not Tell

Think about how people display their feelings. Add some examples to the thinglink then include them in a sentence in the comments box at the bottom of the post.

4 Responses to “Show not Tell”

  1. Thomas Says:

    He tried to grab the air as his hands shoock .His hair stood up like a guard out side Buckingham palace, his cheeks burned as his face quickly turned like Mars.

  2. Owen Says:

    She fell to her knees and her head rolled back .she cradled her aching ribs and her cheeks glowed like the moon.

  3. Jodi Says:

    The toddlers skin was shiny, from all of the tears that trembled down her cheeks, she had bright red lips , because she bit them , whilst she put her head underneath her pillow , so that she could calm herself down , from all of the crying.

  4. Marcus Says:

    Her face shone from the tears that trickled and shivered. She mumbled to her self as she trembled.


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