Posts Tagged ‘Pigeon Impossible’

Pigeon Impossible, By Miaa

Wednesday, April 5th, 2017

One afternoon, Walter Beckett, who was wearing a smart, black suit and carrying a metallic box [which looked like a briefcase], strolled down the bumpy pavement thinking it was a calm; normal day. Sitting down to have his nice lunch, he opened his bag; there was a mouth-watering, large bagel.
As Walter went to take a bite of the delicious bagel, a pigeon swooped down; stopped on the dirty, rusty bench. Giving Walter a sly look, Walter took a piece off the bagel and through it to the pigeon. Unbelievably, the pigeon refused the remarkable bagel. All of a sudden, the unknown item fell off the bench [like a mystery] and the pigeon was gone. Suddenly, the unknown item began to fire red hot, flaming lasers at Walter. Shocked, Walter ran and ducked. Then the briefcase set a rocket off from a building also Walter Becket flew up into the blue, bright sky to save Russia.

Pigeon Imposssible, By Ryan

Wednesday, April 5th, 2017

On one Tuesday morning, a man named Walter Becket was walking down the street, and very sneakily took a rocket controller metallic briefcase out of another spies hand. He sat down on a bench nearby and opened the case and ate his lunch, which was a bagel. Suddenly, a pigeon came out of no ware staring at the bagel. Greedily, the pigeon wanted all of it so it jumped up at Walter, and in fear, he just threw it away to get the pigeon of him. Unsuspectedly, the pigeon fell into the briefcase.
Walter stared at the case wondering what was going to happen. All of a sudden, the bird started peaking at the buttons in the case. Unknown from the bird, it was shooting lasers, flying, and causing havoc everywhere. People were screaming every second; Walter couldn’t think of anything to do. Until, he came up with a plan of: getting the bagel, putting the bagel above fire and hoping the bird would come out. Surprisingly, it worked, the pigeon slowly came out and looked straight at the bagel. Walter went straight for the case; but the pigeon went straight back in and aimed the lasers right at Walter.

Pigeon Impossible

Tuesday, April 4th, 2017

This week we are going to be retelling the story of Pigeon Impossible. We have been looking at expanded noun phrases. Can you share an expanded noun phrase in the comments box that you have planned to use in your writing?


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