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The ruin, by Eva

Thursday, May 11th, 2017

The Ruins

Today started like any other. Walking around the desolate and abandoned waste lands – hunting for the object . As I looked around what was once a beautiful city and now it’s a pile of ancient and forgotten ruins .A whole country was counting on me to save every body ( especially the king and queen ). Once I’ve finished my missions , I have to return it to the queen .I couldn’t let them down . Carefully , I scavenged around the crumbly ruins ; it was of now use (it seemed hopeless).Suddenly, my attention was caught by the noise of an old , abandoned ,metallic container crashing from the edge of once an impressive structure. Hurriedly, I raced towards the dented box – kicking at the rusty hinges. Unpriestly, the door swung open and what did I see ? It was the electronic device , that had only a slight crack in it ,I’d been searching for …

The ruins, By Isabelle

Thursday, May 11th, 2017

The ruins

Grass covered the lifeless town. Once modern houses were now crumbling apart. I approached the dusty dry town; it was murky and smoky. Moss was crawling up the mossy trees (which were wilting). Slowly tip-toeing, I began to wonder what happened to my once joyful town to make it this gloomy. Not one bird in the sky. It was almost like the town had been attacked. But what by? Sky-scrapers with smashed windows glared down on the cracked stone pathway. Why did this happen to the innocent town? Finally I reached the box!
The rusty door was close to falling off. I booted the front causing the lid to fall apart. Peering into the box wishing the thing I was looking for was there, stood the smashed screen. Hands shaking, I reached for the screen and grabbed it. One the delicate screen it read, NANO BOTS 3, 2, 1! Suddenly a deafening crash came from behind me. I slowly turned around and there stood a large, metallic machine guns on the side of it. As fast as I could, I rushed as fast as I could to my motorbike.
Suddenly I remembered I had my laser which could cut through metal. Quickly I grabbed it and through my laser at it! I had defeated the monster! I saw the last dying embers of the machine. It should make a difference, which will be triumphantly, to the others.

The Ruin, by Sam

Thursday, May 11th, 2017

The ruins


It was a normal day just like any other I was looking around at all the mossy buildings and broken houses I couldn’t believe I used to live here in such a nice town and now look what it has turned into my eye cached a glimpse of a tall building, some may say skyscraper just the building I was looking for. Crawling through the piles of rubbish I finally got there but the door was locked which was no use so I kicked it open then suddenly a metallic crate fell from the window I wondered what it was and if it was what I was looking for.
I sprinted across the waste land dunes, which took a while, until I reached a dented old safe. Surprisingly it opened as soon as I touched it and there it was the object I was looking for. I took it out of the safe and used my powers to get it working again. Now I could save my family and my home city. Suddenly, I was disturbed by a buzzing noise then as soon as I turned my head I saw the gyrocopter and his soldier like drones coming to get me. As soon as I saw them I knew what to do. Run! I fell over a few times but I finally made it to my motorbike and off I went
They were caching up so I had to go faster I lost the gyrocopter. I didn’t know if I should leave the mission or carry on. I decided to carry on the mission I went through a long tunnel and the drones exploded when I came out the gyrocopter was there I threw some dynamite at it and BOOM!

Brazil, By Miaa

Wednesday, May 10th, 2017

Brazil is the largest country in South America also Brazil is the only country in South America that speaks Portuguese. The capital city of Brazil is called Brasillia, while the largest city is Sao Paulo. There are around 2500 airports in Brazil.
Places to visit in Brazil
Christ the Redeemer in the 1920s a Catholic church gave money to help make a 2330 feet high replica of Brazilian Christianity- is a symbol of Brazilian Christianity. Iguazu falls are 1.7 miles long and the average height of most falls is 210 feet high but the Iguazu falls is from 219 feet high to 269 feet high. Iguazu is taller than; twice as wide as Niagra falls. There are many more places in Brazil: Sugarloaf Mountains, Niagra falls.
In 2010 the population is 1986142018. In 2012 the population was 194000000. In 2015 the population was 2017847528, which is 9233320 more than 2010. This day today the population is now 211243220, which is 12629012 more than 2010.
In the favelas are over 1.5 million people there. Around 23% – 24%of the population live in the favelas. The houses are homemade and highly dangerous.

Brazil, by Dani

Wednesday, May 10th, 2017


This fact file is all about Brazil (the fifth biggest country in the world) and 2.81% live there. Most people know Brazil is good for sports and definitely football. Read onto find out more Brazil’s: food, carnivals, population and much more facts.


Many people in the world live in Brazil, some poor and some rich. 84.3% of the people that live in Brazil are all urban that’s over than a century ago and more than 4/5g.

The man, by Isabelle

Thursday, April 27th, 2017

Cautiously, I crawled up the moaning stairs. I had a strange feeling, I wasn’t the only one here! Creaking came from the room behind me. My heart beating out of my chest, I peered into the room in front of me. Red blood spread across the ripped bed sheets. Large handprints like a giant were imprinted onto the ancient walls. A petrifying scream echoed through the whole house. To my left was a note, from my mum! The note read, Run! My skin tightened and eyes widened. A shadow of a man with a knife startled me. I ran as fast as a lion catching its prey until I reached a dead end and the man was in front of me …

Pigeon Impossible, By Miaa

Wednesday, April 5th, 2017

One afternoon, Walter Beckett, who was wearing a smart, black suit and carrying a metallic box [which looked like a briefcase], strolled down the bumpy pavement thinking it was a calm; normal day. Sitting down to have his nice lunch, he opened his bag; there was a mouth-watering, large bagel.
As Walter went to take a bite of the delicious bagel, a pigeon swooped down; stopped on the dirty, rusty bench. Giving Walter a sly look, Walter took a piece off the bagel and through it to the pigeon. Unbelievably, the pigeon refused the remarkable bagel. All of a sudden, the unknown item fell off the bench [like a mystery] and the pigeon was gone. Suddenly, the unknown item began to fire red hot, flaming lasers at Walter. Shocked, Walter ran and ducked. Then the briefcase set a rocket off from a building also Walter Becket flew up into the blue, bright sky to save Russia.

Pigeon Imposssible, By Ryan

Wednesday, April 5th, 2017

On one Tuesday morning, a man named Walter Becket was walking down the street, and very sneakily took a rocket controller metallic briefcase out of another spies hand. He sat down on a bench nearby and opened the case and ate his lunch, which was a bagel. Suddenly, a pigeon came out of no ware staring at the bagel. Greedily, the pigeon wanted all of it so it jumped up at Walter, and in fear, he just threw it away to get the pigeon of him. Unsuspectedly, the pigeon fell into the briefcase.
Walter stared at the case wondering what was going to happen. All of a sudden, the bird started peaking at the buttons in the case. Unknown from the bird, it was shooting lasers, flying, and causing havoc everywhere. People were screaming every second; Walter couldn’t think of anything to do. Until, he came up with a plan of: getting the bagel, putting the bagel above fire and hoping the bird would come out. Surprisingly, it worked, the pigeon slowly came out and looked straight at the bagel. Walter went straight for the case; but the pigeon went straight back in and aimed the lasers right at Walter.

Pigeon Impossible

Tuesday, April 4th, 2017

This week we are going to be retelling the story of Pigeon Impossible. We have been looking at expanded noun phrases. Can you share an expanded noun phrase in the comments box that you have planned to use in your writing?

Bagel Breakdown, by Ruby

Thursday, March 30th, 2017


What features can you find in my writing?

Our Class Assembly

Thursday, March 9th, 2017

Today we performed our class assembly for our family and friends all about Fair Trade.

Can you share a fact about FairTrade products and why they are important?

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